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Clouds Bursting Open

Clouds bursting open to let spring rain fall on crops waiting for sun now. Written 5-24-11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/27/2011 9:44:00 PM
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yes yes yes, where will be without sun to follow all that rain. I really fear it won't be coming. Thanks for commeting to Enter, June. I think your poem here kind of goes along with it.
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Caroline Cécile Delacroix
Date: 5/27/2011 5:47:00 PM
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Great visual, James! I had the chance to be critiqued by a haiku expert, he actually said haiku needs not be descriptive, or express our feeling about nature, just simply state what we see. For example, in the case of your haiku, it is written like a sentence in 3 parts. Another way would be, for ex. dark clouds burst open/spring rainfall on fields of crops/the sun shunned for now. I hope you don't mind me sharing this with you. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Matt Hunt
Date: 5/27/2011 3:59:00 PM
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Great job with this one James:)
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/27/2011 3:53:00 PM
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A matter of fact write James, and yet with great essence conveyed.!
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Daver Austin
Date: 5/27/2011 3:09:00 PM
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I can almost smell the freshness, feel the first drops on my forehead. Love, daver
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Anne Rutherford
Date: 5/27/2011 2:32:00 PM
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And all the goodness that comes from the earth.Good poem . James Enjoyed Anne
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 5/27/2011 1:27:00 PM
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Nice expression on the transition, James
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