Clouds Arriving

Frequentative dance Wind jostle with opinion Calling clouds adrift

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:50:00 AM

super love this

James Fraser

Date: 4/22/2010 2:42:00 PM

Rick, i just love how you have assembled this Haiku, and i have to agree with Carolyn. Your flair shines in your Haiku's Big Style >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2010 8:20:00 PM

Lovely words here Rick and I could feel the rain coming as we do expect some this week... enjoyed your creative Haiku tonight..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/20/2010 8:06:00 PM

Very nice, Rick. The next time the clouds start moving in over the coast, I'll be thinking about how the rising wind is "jostling with opinion." You have a flair for haikus! Love, Carolyn