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clouds fluffy marshmallow clusters in the sky 10/8/16 For Ir0nic ZiNk's Lanterns Frenzy contest

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Date: 10/15/2016 5:53:00 PM
Perfect description Kim. Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:36:00 AM
Thank you, Jean!
Date: 10/12/2016 3:28:00 PM
This is a lovely, sweet Lanterne, Kim. I have read all the winning entries, and this is one of the few which had the first and last word closely related (an important requisite for a Lanterne). Warm regards // paul
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:35:00 AM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 10/11/2016 8:58:00 PM
Nice imagery! Congrats on your placement, Kim. Agnes
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:34:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes!
Date: 10/11/2016 4:05:00 PM
Yes, they do look that way, Kim! Nice imagery. Congratulations on your fine placement in the Lanterne contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:30:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 10/11/2016 12:02:00 PM
very cute Kim!congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 10/11/2016 1:55:00 AM
Such a sweet Lanterne, I like this very much:) congratulations on your win, Kim:) a 7 from me:)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:26:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 10/11/2016 1:35:00 AM
I love this little sweet poem! Congratulations :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:25:00 AM
Thank you, Darren!
Date: 10/10/2016 6:37:00 PM
so so beautiful a description Kim:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:25:00 AM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 10/10/2016 5:16:00 PM
This is very metaphor. That is exactly what they resemble. Congrats on your placement.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:18:00 AM
Thank you, Janis!
Date: 10/10/2016 5:06:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest... Ir0niC Zink
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:18:00 AM
Thank you for my placement, Ir0niC! I appreciate it !
Date: 10/9/2016 6:13:00 AM
Beautiful ...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 10/16/2016 1:16:00 AM
Thank you, Probir!

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