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Inspired by Nathan D. and... Debbie Guzzi

looking up at sky billowing clouds steal the show all else disappear from high atop a grassy mound this early spring show of clouds kissing sienna clouds circles seeing green beneath our feet seeking dew drenched buds * Entry for Nathan D. Haiku 101 contest

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/17/2016 8:53:00 PM

Aww clouds kissing ... how sweet. With their abstract shapes you can almost make them do anything you want. Nice haiku collage. Very summery feeling to me.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/18/2016 8:14:00 PM

Thanks Timothy. Have a wonderful weekend.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2016 11:20:00 AM

Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/5/2016 11:34:00 AM

Funom, you're always so positive and warm. Thanks dear one. Have a wonderful week.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2016 5:43:00 PM

Nicely done and nicely won. Congratulations, Iris

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/11/2016 8:05:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. yr 1 of thee best.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2016 1:27:00 PM

I still enjoy cloud-watching, believe it or not, and my g'daughter and I like making out shapes out of them:) Enjoyed your winning haiku (even the extra 2); congratulations! // paul

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/11/2016 8:06:00 AM

Thanks Paul. We see sky as canvas with abstract art.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2016 12:11:00 AM

Iris, Congrats on your "Haiku 101" win. LINDA

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/11/2016 8:08:00 AM

Hi Lin. Thanks again.

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/9/2016 11:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Awesome!

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/11/2016 8:08:00 AM

Susan, U 2 inspires. Thank U.

Nathan D.

Date: 2/9/2016 9:08:00 PM

thanks for the extra two verses

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/11/2016 8:10:00 AM

Nathan I had to return. Thanks for visiting...

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/6/2016 9:04:00 AM

Iris, I see I am not alone in this reaction! I try to ink my own feelings before reading others, extending my true feelings, fun to see others agree! jimbo

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM

James Marshall Goff, I like you. By way of expressions; frank and true, your smile shining through I see, keep that aura about you.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/6/2016 9:01:00 AM

Hi Iris! Sure! I can tell you the 2nd haiku, last line, personifies clouds kissing, for me, this sparks Images that transcend time, allows the reader to escape the sometimes harsh reality of everyday toils and guides one towards the beauty & possibilities surrounding us! In other words, your poem has healing benefits, for me!

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM

So you got to the nitty gritty of it. Hugs.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/4/2016 9:41:00 PM

When we watch the clouds go by, our troubles just seem to float away with them... I really liked this wonderful poem. It takes me back to a more carefree time... Lovely work, Iris! Good luck in Nathan's contest!

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:57:00 AM

Thanks Kelly. Stay cozy.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/4/2016 7:28:00 PM

Sweet!

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:57:00 AM

Which part, James. Have a wonderful weekend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/4/2016 5:37:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go with this work..Clouds can steal the show in more ways than one..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:59:00 AM

Sara, so kind of you to think that. Stay cozy.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2016 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Iris, it makes me happy to hear that. if in some way I encourage a poet or two, I must be doing something right. Hugs. Linda

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/6/2016 8:00:00 AM

You're in my fave list. Stay cozy.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2016 10:30:00 AM

Hello, Iris, thank you for the lovely cloud show. I'm a coock when it comes to gazing at clouds... I bet Nathan is going to love all 3. Nature relaxing, cloud computing power. Lol..I meant imagery ... perfect 7. Linda

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/4/2016 10:33:00 AM

So encouraging. Thank you dear one.