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Clouded Winter Snowflakes

Your sadness like clouded winter snowflakes, floats upon chilled winds against dark tear stained skies, accumulating in sorrowed drifts around my heart Frigid moments shiver of lost and lonely days, when mornings never arrive and arctic evenings wrap your lonely world in bleak frozen fingers And I watch helpless, through frosted glass panes, icicle teardrops glistening on my chapped cheeks, wanting desperately to hold you safely in my arms So you will know this season shall not last, spring will soon bring her flowers and blue skies to warm you, to comfort you and to love you just as I do

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Date: 11/12/2016 1:38:00 PM
Winter is never ending at times...so this beauty gives hope for a Spring..One day..before we close our eyes..We smell its fragrance and taste its crystal sugars from manna drops...Comforting poem here for anyone whose heart is at antartica : ): )
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend, you got my meaning exactly as I had hoped. I always appreciate your beautiful comments on my work.
Date: 11/11/2016 11:45:00 PM
Wow. That's all I can say, Chris, is wow. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thanks you Christy, I'll take a wow from you anytime. :)
Date: 11/11/2016 9:05:00 PM
Great metaphor use here Chris. Had me guessing ..... is this a longing for spring ...or a lost or unapproachable love.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 9:01:00 AM
Pretty much it was a message to a friend that no matter what, springtime always be there for her as will I. Thanks so much John for reading and commenting on my poem.
Date: 11/11/2016 8:17:00 PM
That's what I love about your poetry, it flows and rolls off the tongue so gently and free. Yet your distinct personality shows every time throughout the piece. Great job Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so very much Rick for your encouraging comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read and let me know what you think.
Date: 11/11/2016 8:14:00 PM
A nice poem of wings towards love ...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so much again my friend for your nice comment
Date: 11/11/2016 6:14:00 PM
don't kiss and tell.. you little devil..whoever she is...she better deserve you...
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:59:00 AM
I think it is the other way around. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 11/11/2016 6:10:00 PM
Hi Chris. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I just wrote something that mirrors this Winter you may see parallels. Looking through Frosted Glass pains that we have to go out in. Never felt that on a sunny summers day. Cheers Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 11/14/2016 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so very much Christopher, I will check it out when I get a chance.

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