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Cloud Walker

You are on cloud nine it must be so great I look up in awe as I sit on eight Eight is okay it's better than seven compared to six it's a slice of Heaven I don't remember five except it's loud People got lost on that very dark cloud Four was okay with it's silver lining We ate marshmellows my kind of dining Three was sure fun video on demand The cloud sparkling like fluffy white sand Two was my favorite clear views like a show I could see the faces of my loved ones below When it comes to music I like number one It's the place I started when life was done So here I am waiting destination number nine If I'm lucky the Angels will serve wine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/12/2013 9:12:00 AM
Richard This is a cute and cleverly written poem The reader is actually taken into your cloud world. It is fun and makes the reader smile Nice job
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Date: 3/5/2013 3:07:00 PM
Creativity and perfect perspective are present here. Great write.... My pen is inspired by your work..... Jake
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2013 4:31:00 PM
Thanks Jake, I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 3/2/2013 4:34:00 PM
Love it ;}
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2013 10:20:00 PM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 2/27/2013 7:25:00 PM
It's a pleasure to explore through your beautiful heaven Rick! :D A brilliant inspirations! This is really a delightful appetite which served on a platter of poetry :) enjoyed my 'breakfast' this morning :D - hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2013 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Yanny, good night.
Date: 2/27/2013 4:37:00 PM
richard, whatever inspired this one? it is SO delightful. Truly, one of the most charming poems I have seen this week. Love how you made the lower clouds just as inviting as the top ones. Luv, Andrea
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2013 4:41:00 PM
I was looking out my window yesterday morning at fluffy clouds and this little ditty popped into my mind. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 2/27/2013 4:12:00 AM
RICHARD!!! How is this even possible? Both of us wrote about Cloud #9...I must say..It's been on my mind for some time, and I had a VERY different twist to it, but...I held back due to...some previous experience which you know about...Enough babbling...THIS IS SUBLIME! :) You made this poem a dream.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 PM
Thanks Eileen I enjoyed yours as well.
Date: 2/26/2013 6:34:00 PM
Ha ha, this is such a cleverly written write my friend! I am enthralled by this delightful poem! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful piece this evening! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2013 6:37:00 PM
Thanks Russell. I must say it is nice to see your smiling face. Your dog is very cute but I like seeing you better.

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