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Cloud Walker

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Cloud Walker

You are on cloud nine it must be so great
I look up in awe as I sit on eight

Eight is okay it's better than seven
compared to six it's a slice of Heaven

I don't remember five except it's loud
People got lost on that very dark cloud

Four was okay with it's silver lining
We ate marshmellows my kind of dining

Three was sure fun video on demand
The cloud sparkling like fluffy white sand

Two was my favorite clear views like a show
I could see the faces of my loved ones below

When it comes to music I like number one
It's the place I started when life was done

So here I am waiting destination number nine
If I'm lucky the  Angels will serve wine

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  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:12:00 AM
    Richard This is a cute and cleverly written poem The reader is actually taken into your cloud world. It is fun and makes the reader smile Nice job

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Creativity and perfect perspective are present here. Great write.... My pen is inspired by your work..... Jake

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/5/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jake, I appreciate your kind words.
  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Love it ;}

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/2/2013 10:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 7:25:00 PM
    It's a pleasure to explore through your beautiful heaven Rick! :D A brilliant inspirations! This is really a delightful appetite which served on a platter of poetry :) enjoyed my 'breakfast' this morning :D - hug, yanny

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/28/2013 7:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Yanny, good night.
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:37:00 PM
    richard, whatever inspired this one? it is SO delightful. Truly, one of the most charming poems I have seen this week. Love how you made the lower clouds just as inviting as the top ones. Luv, Andrea

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/27/2013 4:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I was looking out my window yesterday morning at fluffy clouds and this little ditty popped into my mind. Thanks for commenting.
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 4:12:00 AM
    RICHARD!!! How is this even possible? Both of us wrote about Cloud #9...I must say..It's been on my mind for some time, and I had a VERY different twist to it, but...I held back due to...some previous experience which you know about...Enough babbling...THIS IS SUBLIME! :) You made this poem a dream.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Eileen I enjoyed yours as well.
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 1:36:00 AM
    Hi Ricahrd like this very clever indeed hope the angels give you champagne of the finest as this write befits, all the best Owen

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/27/2013 4:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    champagne sounds good but in no rush to get up there!
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Haha oh gosh, this was so fun- very spunky, I love it!! You are so versatile with your poetry, no two poems are similar! Very clever and it couldn't have been penned more perfectly. Hugs <3

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/26/2013 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Anne. I am pleased you enjoyed it.
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:34:00 PM
    Ha ha, this is such a cleverly written write my friend! I am enthralled by this delightful poem! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful piece this evening! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 2/26/2013 6:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Russell. I must say it is nice to see your smiling face. Your dog is very cute but I like seeing you better.