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Cloud Nine

Your Love flows through my body With static delight As you hold me in your tender arms Under moonlight tonight The passion in our eyes Sparkling brighter than the stars As we drift on beautiful love Past jupitor and mars

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The Situation

Date: 2/26/2013 3:18:00 AM

Just a note to keep love growing.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/14/2012 1:41:00 PM

Dear Elizabeth, After reading this POETIC Masterpiece, I see YOUR LOVE outshines all YOUR other Attributes. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/15/2012 5:00:00 AM

Love you too xox

David Scott

Date: 12/13/2012 12:30:00 PM

THANKS FOR COMENTS ELIZABETH JUST STOPING BY TO READ YOUR POEM AGAIN XX DAVIDSCOTT YOU HAVE SOUP

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/13/2012 2:34:00 PM

Thank you David, love Elizabeth xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/9/2012 4:47:00 AM

How ethereal! A wonderfully romantic rhyme! :)

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/9/2012 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Eileen, love elizabeth

David Scott

Date: 11/29/2012 12:08:00 PM

VERY NICE POEM CLOUD NINE A WORD I UESD IN MY POEM SUBLIME WICKED I DID ASK HER OUT BUT SHE WAS ALREADY SPOKEN FOR I DID A FOLLOW UP CALLED HSE KNOWS WHICH EXPLAINS WHAT HAPPENED XX DAVIDSCOTT

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/29/2012 3:04:00 PM

Thank you David, That's a shame about your girl, you shouldn't have left it too late, love Elizabeth xx