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Cloud Ballet

The lake grasses rustle in the soft wind grown brittle with the season's passing, slim wooden tubes of melody; they pipe summer's passing song . . . over sung by bold tree frogs' laughter rising in a louder chorus that drowns out all sounds nature offers up. My canoe slips soundlessly across mirrored waters where clouds sway in reflected ballet, graceful adagio flowing. They make my boat the central figure. It pirouettes in time to nature's song. Copyright, September 9, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 10/4/2014 1:57:00 AM
Quite an artistic write, congrats on the win, Faye
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Date: 10/3/2014 11:34:00 PM
My favorite one so far on the list for beautiful imagery! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/3/2014 10:59:00 PM
created a lovely picture in my mind, Faye! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/3/2014 10:35:00 PM
Loved it Faye, an artist with words.....Seren
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Date: 10/3/2014 10:09:00 PM
A distinct set of images which draw us closer to the protection of your canoe. I enjoyed it - congratulations and thanks for the interaction with my etheree too.
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Date: 10/3/2014 8:56:00 PM
Pretty writing ad great win. congratulations.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Etheree Faye.
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:22:00 PM
love the imagery in this serene poem Faye great pen congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs
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Date: 10/3/2014 6:21:00 PM
I love the idea of frogs laughing Faye - a delightful write. many congrats on your top spot. hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2014 12:59:00 PM
Very lovely Etheree, Faye! Truly enjoyed reading you some today. Writing in all these wonderful poetry forms and styles I've found it so fascinating for years now. I am quite addicted to poetry and so many of its poetic forms. Lol. Can't help it love poetry and writing it.... Best wishes Faye! Be back to read you more! xxxx D.
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Date: 9/11/2014 8:42:00 PM
Such a beautiful Etheree. I enjoyed ready it very much.
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Date: 9/11/2014 4:29:00 PM
Such a lovely scene - soup mail Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2014 12:02:00 PM
Proud to be the first to comment. What a great write. I loved reading it.
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