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Cloud 9

i thought i was on cloud nine until my cloud started raining i realized i was really still down to earth i should have been higher up by now but the IV is higher than me my OD brought me to the lowest i could go and i am slowly sinking six feet under... dedicated to Jacks you will be missed my friend

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Date: 5/17/2009 10:59:00 AM
There are day when we are moving along with grace then suddenly, things change. Well we all encounter those; however, we have the resiliency of getting up, shaking out the dust, and getting back into the race. Great job! ~Joseph
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