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Cloud - Andaree

The shape-shifting wonders filling out the sky Smoothly change in the blink of an eye. Beast. Creatures. Flowers or crowd... Some drape like a shroud. And every Cloud The very Sky promotes them proud. To our ears, their rain sounds loud. Clouds fill us with awe as they pass by - The shape-shifting wonders filling out the sky.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2024 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations. What a wonderful "Cloud - Andaree" write. Have a great day with your win...................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2024 8:39:00 AM

This was very nicely rhymed and put together. Thanks for entering my contest congrats on a podium win

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 4/29/2024 12:17:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. It was a very unique form to try. Helps us to get our little grey cells into gear. Thank you for setting the contest. :-D warm wishes .

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/27/2024 8:20:00 AM

Dear Natasha, I so enjoyed reading your poem. Love the images as the sky is filled with them. I’ve always found clouds to be fascinating looking at the different shapes. They are wonders indeed. This is a new form to me and you have created a really lovely poem. Thank you for sharing and inspiring. :):)

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 4/27/2024 10:00:00 AM

Thank you Christina. It was new to me too. Getting the count right was a bit of a challenge especially when the mind wants to phrase things a certain way. But it was a fun one to try :-D warm wishes :-D

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 4/13/2024 1:48:00 PM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 4/13/2024 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Jeanette:-D

Jim Healey

Date: 4/13/2024 1:10:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Natasha. i have also just written an Andaree, but it is a pale attempt compared to yours! Well done. Cheers! Jim

Natasha L Scragg
Date: 4/13/2024 3:05:00 PM

Hi Jim thank you for your kind feedback. This was quite a challenging one to write as there were multiple things to think about. It's always good for us to stretch out boundaries and have a go at something new. :-D