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Closure

You and me we've met before Without thinking we opened Love's door Time stood still light illuminated dark Heaven bequeathed an undeniable spark A fiery reunion of the ages Passion fueled the turning of the pages Instant comfort still a mystery Karmic mirrors about to make history Bubbles surface in the cauldron of shame Undoubted truth glows in the flame Standing naked for me to see Remarkably, you look just like me Vulnerable to our scars,wounds and flaws We are blinded by the unrealistic nature of laws A long journey down the path of pain When will our soul's peace ever be regained Broken hearts over secrets and lies You will never see through these eyes Failed divine intervention for the selfish ego Time is up Time to let go Certain of unfinished karmic debt Remains remorse for the goals set Goodbye with honor and gratitude Happiness and joy shall not allude

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Date: 10/8/2014 1:20:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jamie- I choose your first very well written poem I like it a lot ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2014 4:49:00 PM
Jamie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:02:00 AM
Jamie, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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