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Closing Argument

Time no longer exist between you and me Space is something that locks a door between will and what will be Dreams are just illusions I let myself pretend Memories are the facts I establish to make my court room stand Pain is my witness that will not be denied Love is my defense dressed in all it's pride Rain, the number of tears and wishes my sunshine Hope and Faith are one in the same message in my mind Yet and still every year this question I must ask For it has been decreed that I must do this task Sence love is time and time is love and love doesn't always pass Will you be my Valentine this year and through the last (As always this time of year this is for my April)

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Date: 3/5/2014 2:31:00 PM
You Know Old Friend You Have Improved In Leaps As Bounds Your Verse, Since We First Met Back In The Days Now Gone By Here, At Her Loving's PoetrySoup ~ You Keep Brushing And This Is Wonderful! ~ Love John
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Date: 2/16/2014 4:16:00 PM
7 John! You won with that Closing Argument! Judgement in favor of the poet! my best, chuck
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Date: 2/11/2014 1:36:00 PM
Soup Mail..Sara
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John Loving Iii
Date: 2/11/2014 4:58:00 PM
"ah ite then"
Date: 2/10/2014 6:21:00 PM
Sweet poem. I especially like the last four lines, John.
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:07:00 PM
Who is April?
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:48:00 AM
Pick up the phone and punch in 911 and tell them that you need an ambulance or a hearse...Great passionate Valentine work..Remembering is good..Sara
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Date: 2/6/2014 9:53:00 AM
This is how I'll keep her.
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