Closer Than a Kiss

How can we get closer than a sweet kiss? Two lovers drift in the arms of first sin There is the sharing of lovers own skin Closer than a kiss, where it did begin That’s how we get closer sharing a kiss © 3/01/2013 Contest Entry Envelop Quintet.

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James Fraser

Date: 1/24/2013 1:40:00 PM

The sharing of a kiss in various circumstances, but it's the sharing of that kiss that leaves to loving trances. Nice one Mandy, love the title if I may say so. Most deserved of it's win :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/25/2013 1:37:00 AM

thanks James xx

Sean Goodwin

Date: 1/14/2013 9:37:00 AM

Very nicely written! Enjoyed the read. Many congrats. Thanks for commenting on mine. -- Sean

Heather Ober

Date: 1/9/2013 9:13:00 AM

Congrats on an awesome win and a wonderful write!

Joseph May

Date: 1/8/2013 7:40:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Mandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2013 7:14:00 PM

congrats, mandy. Finally I can come here and say that. This was very cute.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/8/2013 6:36:00 PM

Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Lovely to share the spot with you. Light & Love

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/3/2013 2:13:00 PM

nice one, good luck in the contest..

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Robert Ludden

Date: 1/3/2013 12:17:00 PM

Sounds like fun!