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I found pictures of Envelope Quintets on the internet..They are when someone writes them on an envelope or sends them to someone in a letter..
The zephyr that I couldn't dismiss And pouring rain only sounds heard Then the Spirit gave a good word Go to sleep_rest, Spirit did undergird God's presence, closer than a kiss Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich contest: A Catch-Phrase Dazzler: 1 In 5 Choice Written: December 26, 2012 Envelope Quintet/ information found Meter at the discretion of writer Rhyme scheme can be_a, b, b, b, a or a, b, c, b, a(usually when more than one stanza then the stanzas interlock)

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Date: 1/12/2013 8:50:00 PM
Beautiful ma'ma.. hello there nice to meet you .
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Date: 1/9/2013 2:08:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your winning spot Sara xx
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:12:00 PM
congrats to you, Sara. I especially loved the last line!!
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:32:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/3/2013 9:57:00 AM
Nice write, surprise me here.
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Date: 12/31/2012 6:15:00 AM
i personally love this one :) on soup after a long long time, happy new year!
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Date: 12/29/2012 12:03:00 PM
BRAVO Sara! So well composed, with a smooth flow, excellent rhyming and an inspirational message! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/27/2012 8:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem dear Sara. Wishing you a wonderful holiday season. Warmest thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 12/26/2012 8:49:00 PM
Sara, i like this... beautiful... pd
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Date: 12/26/2012 6:56:00 PM
Yes, very. Love it, Sara. Good luck with the contest!
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Date: 12/26/2012 2:46:00 PM
yes i feel his presence, when the angels show us bliss
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Date: 12/26/2012 1:08:00 PM
descriptive... ture! the intimacy of the Spirit glues one to the Father
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Date: 12/26/2012 11:13:00 AM
Enlightening write , enjoyed.
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Date: 12/26/2012 8:14:00 AM
This is a wondrous write my friend! I really lovred reading this amazing and powerful poem this morning! what a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/26/2012 7:40:00 AM
I like this one. Thanks for reading my poem (Heckle & Jeckle) It was a horrible time.
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Date: 12/26/2012 7:38:00 AM
Excellent and extremely wonderful verse which uplifts one's spirit my dear friend, Sara. God's presence is really closer than a kiss. A winning piece for me! Thank you so much for sharing! Merry Christmas to you and your love ones! Wishing you all the best. love always, Leonora
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Date: 12/26/2012 7:25:00 AM
not familiar with this 'envelope quintet', but it is a lovely write... i like the word 'zephyr'....
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