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Closely Watched

soft, warm, summer breeze tender kiss, sweet surrender hawks slowly circle

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Date: 1/29/2020 10:31:00 PM
Awesome senryu, Peter! I enjoyed the superb imagery.
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Peter W Iversen
Date: 2/1/2020 8:31:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Evelyn & thanks for the comments-Peter
Date: 1/29/2020 5:46:00 PM
Hello Peter Iversen, yes the Hawks closely watch. have a nice evening my friend.
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Peter W Iversen
Date: 2/1/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thanks for the read Darlene-Peter

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