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Closed Eyes

We seem To walk through life with our eyes closed Oblivious to pain That stays away From us Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 2012 Reverse Cinquain

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/29/2014 8:27:00 PM

Neat idea you flipped it. I guess you could do that to any form that lends it self to change of form from a flip. Very educational. You have my head spinning now about the discovery of new forms if that is even possible any more

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 9:00:00 PM

A couple years ago I searched for new poetry types because I have always been a rhymer. I thought I had learned many forms but when I got here I realized I had only scratched the surface of poetry. I enjoy to try new ones but I am not yet ready for everything.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/29/2014 7:13:00 PM

A very good one! Very deep Brenda! God bless you! xxxxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 9:01:00 PM

Thanks for your visits Dorian, you always have such sweet comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2014 3:36:00 PM

well, if it stays away from me, that is the kind of pain I want to have!! "Very interesting how you did it reversed, Brenda.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/29/2014 4:58:00 PM

Thanks Andrea

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/28/2014 12:01:00 AM

This world might be a better place if we just opened our eyes and paid attention to the real problems. There is no way that we can trip and fall, if we remove the blindfold.... This is a deep write, Brenda. I like the lessons that you are teaching here. Well done!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2014 5:41:00 AM

Not only our eyes but our hearts..Enjoyed reading your thoughts this morn..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/27/2014 10:53:00 AM

Thank Sara. I hope you are feeling better.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 2:49:00 AM

not only our eyes closed but our hearts too when you see the terrible suffering in the world - great deep write Brenda:-) hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/27/2014 10:51:00 AM

Thanks Jan for stopping by.