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Close Your Eyes

Close your eyes.. Let your mind rest Escape from the reality Imagination can bring peace Just keep picturing that warm fire With the sunset-colored glow of the flames.. Sitting next to me, warm and comfy There's nowhere else you need to be.. Feel your body relax Let this euphoric epiphany Breathe through your soul.. Exhale the chaos inside.. Every little breath counts.. This escape from reality Is a free day of life.. Just set yourself free.. Close your eyes.. And think of Me

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Date: 10/22/2009 11:34:00 PM
Now, that is pure persuasion! What girl could resist the line, "Let this euphoric epiphany Breathe through your soul.."?? Masterful invitation to make you the man of her dreams! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/21/2009 11:24:00 AM
You put your heart right out there in this write excellent Captain. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2009 5:12:00 AM
It's so calming So...natural So...passionate I love it
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Date: 10/20/2009 10:14:00 PM
a beautiful flowing piece which shows the passion in your heart and mind,,,Blessings..Cecil
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