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Close the Zip - Zeugma Contest

ran the bath and fingers through my hair I buttoned my blouse and my lip no longer in love, no longer care ran the bath and fingers through my hair wanted to soak away hurt not talk and swear needed to relax my heart and close the zip ran the bath and fingers through my hair I buttoned my blouse and my lip Penned 24August 2014 Zeugma's ran the bath and fingers through my hair I buttoned my blouse and my lip.

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/24/2014 11:12:00 AM

Wow that's brilliant n witty Seren! Great work!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/24/2014 6:41:00 AM

Isn't it clever how these zeugma's work. It makes your mind break down the sentence structure, enjoyable to read, like unworking a puzzle to see the picture. Best of luck to ya in the contest, a great entry.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/24/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Casarah wasn't easy to think of something. Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 8/24/2014 6:39:00 AM

Fabulous Seren....I liked the zeugma with lip and button....Im sure all the guys only wanted you to button one and leave the other unbuttoned :) hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2014 8:24:00 AM

LOL! Jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2014 5:01:00 AM

I cant even get my head round this form Seren! Good luck with the contest I loved the write:-) hugs Jan xxx

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/24/2014 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Jan it wasn't easy to think of something....Seren