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Through the cloudy foggy Air I searched for you Waiting for the sun to Rise and dry the morning dew A celestial treasure Your love has given me Rose petals and Hyacinths Each and every heartbeat If I could but whisper Your name upon the wind Would time reverse And my love rise again?

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/27/2024 6:16:00 AM

it surely would dear poet, the heart owns its own poetry and love, thank you for sharing these amazing words today, have a blessed one Kelli :)

Kelli White
Date: 2/27/2024 9:27:00 AM

Thank you so much MR, god bless you as well,kelli

Ink Empress

Date: 2/26/2024 9:17:00 AM

What an evocative and soulful write this is, i love the descriptive nature of your thoughts, expressed in such eloquence. Especially the opening lines. Drew me right in. I loved “ Your name upon the wind Would time reverse And my love rise again?“ soul touching and so poignant. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light

Kelli White
Date: 2/26/2024 4:42:00 PM

Thank you very much, Ink, kelli

Marugu Mo

Date: 2/26/2024 7:55:00 AM

If only whispers would...love it

Kelli White
Date: 2/26/2024 4:43:00 PM

Hello Mr Mo , thank you for stopping by, hope you are well, kelli

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/25/2024 4:11:00 PM

Dear Kelli, The imagery of the foggy air and rising sun evokes a sense of searching and desiring. The contrast between the present and the past - between the "celestial treasure" and "rose petals and hyacinths" - beautifully highlights the feelings of loss and reminiscence. The ending question, "Would time reverse and my love rise again?", carries a strong emotional weight, leaving a lasting impression on me the reader. Such a heartfelt piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Kelli White
Date: 2/26/2024 6:39:00 AM

Thank you very much Daniel, you are very kind, kelli