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Tomorrow is here, the reckoning of another day gone. Rushing at the open door of now, spent before I can wrap myself around it. A wave of time that crashes with surprise, slips away without looking back. Hands that cannot hold it, point at the door through which it has gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/11/2013 8:56:00 AM
Stanley, this is an enticing, engaging poem. It helped me realize that the reason for time is change.
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Stanley Cannon
Date: 11/16/2013 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Mark, I appreciate your comments.
Date: 11/10/2013 7:06:00 PM
I would love to use this in my magazine , giving you credit of course. Let me know if I can. Thanks.
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Date: 11/16/2013 2:50:00 PM
That would be an honor Marvin!
Date: 11/10/2013 12:00:00 PM
A very skilled write with awesome imagery. Congratulations, found this on the "Featured Poem of the Week" page
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Date: 11/16/2013 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Karen, those are very encouraging words
Date: 10/13/2013 8:35:00 PM
oOo......... life is hard, and i can't express how awesome the imagery is... a wave that crashes.... what a twist in thoughts...love it..........SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2013 2:55:00 PM
Thanks for being the first to comment on my poetry. I look forward to reading more from you.

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