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Clipped feathers

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Clipped feathers

My feathers  clipped by ruthless time
               Me  in my prime
                   In a prison
              Of life’s treason

Some strength ,still  left inside my heart
               To freshly start
                  To get going
                   Again flying

My patience helped ,to grow new wings
              Those feathered  things
                A flight to dreams
                Now, easy seems!!

11/10/12
By- Irfana ali Bhat
Contest- Just A Minute!

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 11:22:00 AM
    Wonderful write! Congrats on your win! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 6:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super placement in Nette's "Just A Minute" contest Irfana. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:46:00 AM
    Irfana, a wonderful creative entry, well deserved first!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:32:00 PM
    Excellent poetry Irfana, congrats on your super win, enjoyed reading, love vie

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:14:00 PM
    Oh, I think this is wonderful! Yes YES deserving of the top spot. Emotes truth with clarity yet is built on/with metaphor. Reminds me of Maya Angelou. Congrats on the win and thank you for sharing. Smiles from Cyndi

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:35:00 AM
    wonderful and what a win for you. congratulations, Irfana.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Andrea...:))
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:09:00 AM
    A lovely poem on feathers. Congratulations on your win.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joann...xx...:))
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:17:00 AM
    Congrats to u on an outstanding write!!

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks ....
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:10:00 AM
    I can see why you won, this is very good and relevant. Well done.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 12:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks...:)
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 6:30:00 AM
    Wonderful content! and imagery Congrad's on your win. Light and Love

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie...:))
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:51:00 AM
    Big congratulations Irfana, well done xx

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy...:)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 10:48:00 PM
    Many congrats Irfana for tis awesome win.

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Tahera..:))
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:30:00 PM
    Irfana, congratulations in Nette's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest.. wishing you well.. xox~PD

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks PD...xx..:)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:43:00 PM
    What a wonderful way you have chosen to use the theme of this contest. Well done, and hooray for your number 1 win!!!

    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Carrie...:)