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Clipped Feathers

My feathers clipped by ruthless time Me in my prime In a prison Of life’s treason Some strength ,still left inside my heart To freshly start To get going Again flying My patience helped ,to grow new wings Those feathered things A flight to dreams Now, easy seems!! 11/10/12 By- Irfana ali Bhat Contest- Just A Minute!

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Tanya Harrington
Date: 10/29/2012 11:22:00 AM
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Wonderful write! Congrats on your win! :) Tanya
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/29/2012 6:17:00 AM
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Congratulations on your super placement in Nette's "Just A Minute" contest Irfana. Love, Carol
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 10/27/2012 8:14:00 PM
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Oh, I think this is wonderful! Yes YES deserving of the top spot. Emotes truth with clarity yet is built on/with metaphor. Reminds me of Maya Angelou. Congrats on the win and thank you for sharing. Smiles from Cyndi
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/27/2012 9:35:00 AM
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wonderful and what a win for you. congratulations, Irfana.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 12:50:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea...:))
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Joann Grisetti
Date: 10/27/2012 9:09:00 AM
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A lovely poem on feathers. Congratulations on your win.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 12:50:00 PM
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Thanks Joann...xx...:))
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 10/27/2012 8:17:00 AM
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Congrats to u on an outstanding write!!
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 12:49:00 PM
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Thanks ....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2012 8:10:00 AM
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I can see why you won, this is very good and relevant. Well done.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 12:49:00 PM
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Thanks...:)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/27/2012 6:30:00 AM
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Wonderful content! and imagery Congrad's on your win. Light and Love
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 8:09:00 AM
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Thanks Debbie...:))
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/27/2012 3:51:00 AM
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Big congratulations Irfana, well done xx
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 8:09:00 AM
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Thanks Mandy...:)
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 10/26/2012 10:48:00 PM
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Many congrats Irfana for tis awesome win.
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 8:08:00 AM
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Thanks Tahera..:))
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:30:00 PM
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Irfana, congratulations in Nette's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest.. wishing you well.. xox~PD
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 8:08:00 AM
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Thanks PD...xx..:)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 10/26/2012 7:43:00 PM
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What a wonderful way you have chosen to use the theme of this contest. Well done, and hooray for your number 1 win!!!
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/27/2012 8:08:00 AM
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thanks Carrie...:)

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