Clinging Cat

Cat clings excitedly To four by four support post Dog barks nips at heels

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/31/2009 4:00:00 AM

I can just picture this hilarity!!! great haiku! Sara! jim

Brian Strand

Date: 7/27/2009 12:44:00 AM

Nice one Sara.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.

James Fraser

Date: 7/26/2009 12:00:00 PM

Kool poem Sara, made me chuckle a little>>James

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/26/2009 10:08:00 AM

Sara, its not a contest, its a game. You must write a poem about a ghost story, any formor format you chose. No pressure, you have 24 hours to complete the poem,good luck, Bill

Constance La France

Date: 7/26/2009 8:35:00 AM

poor kitty, I hope she scratched that nasy dog on the nose... well done... it made me smile...

James Knox

Date: 7/26/2009 6:29:00 AM

reminds me of my cat running and hiding from the big dog , great job :)

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/26/2009 6:28:00 AM

Sara, I hope you don't mind, but I have tagged you fir the dead poets ghost story game. No rush, no pressure. You have 24 hours, Bill

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/26/2009 5:41:00 AM

Great Haiku Sara, thank you Bill