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Click You Heels

Close your eyes and click your heels Tell me what you see I'll close my eyes and click my heels Then see what I can see We can take our dreams We can live our wishes Making life...... more than a fantasy You in your castle, high upon the ridge Me down in the market, trying to make ends meet Two lives separate but both the same Hopelessly waiting, aimlessly searching To find our forever Our happily ever after I click my heels and now I see what beauty lies is in front of me Those flowing locks that daunting smile the heart that beats alone looking to be wild, to be set free Hiding behind a wall of stone When you click you heels do you see me? Down in the market waiting patiently With eyes of blue and a heart that's true Wanting to be your every delight Your savior, your forever, your white knight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/1/2019 8:06:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 11/7/2014 5:05:00 PM
A lovely poem... Such a romantic Princess and soon to be prince... The dream is all there.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/7/2014 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Carol....hugs Tim
Date: 11/4/2014 9:06:00 PM
A click of your heels and a snap of your fingers and the magic should appear. You are indeed a master. Loved it. Hugs Edith
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Date: 11/4/2014 10:00:00 PM
Thank you Edith....hugs
Date: 11/4/2014 5:33:00 PM
This is a romantic love piece Tim! Very sweet! A 7 from me!Cheers! :) Xxxxx D.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Dorian my friend...hugs Tim
Date: 11/3/2014 12:07:00 PM
beautifully painted piece tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you liam my dear friend
Date: 11/3/2014 11:28:00 AM
Big smiles here !!! Fun in a good and romantic way !!! Well done !! Maybe I should try clicking my heels?? lol
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Debra...we all should... Hugs Tim
Date: 11/3/2014 9:08:00 AM
There's no place like love, there's no place like love. I actually really enjoyed reading this poem Tim. A really great one!
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Date: 11/3/2014 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Brenda...I was reading a lot of books to my four year old...hugs Tim
Date: 11/3/2014 6:13:00 AM
Reminds me of Aladdin. :) cool poem to start off my morning, hugs ;)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Cas....haven't seen that in ages...hugs
Date: 11/2/2014 12:03:00 PM
Ow those clicking and clacking of heels make me think of dancing...This is dreamy and beautiful Tim.. It is !!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/2/2014 12:09:00 PM
Thank you sweetie....hugs Tim
Date: 11/2/2014 10:35:00 AM
Oh what a delightful write my friend - don't stop dreaming Tim - it may become a relality one day :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2014 10:42:00 AM
Thanks Jan...I will never stop the dream...hugs Tim
Date: 11/2/2014 9:23:00 AM
Another great write Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/2/2014 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Maurice my good friend..

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