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Clever Girl

A foxy dame passed through a diner with auburn locks bouncing here and there. Dude sighed, “ take the best wine but tonight you’re all mine; chimed she,” hike off; I’m this bar’s owner.” Roy Jerden's Clean And Clever Limerick 11/16/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/21/2014 7:22:00 PM
Good goin'........:-) love it
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:38:00 PM
very beautifully sewn together excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 11/19/2014 1:43:00 AM
excellent Nette you nailed it gl in contest hugs
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Date: 11/18/2014 5:15:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..It is nice for the woman to be the winner..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/18/2014 2:39:00 PM
Oh to have seen the dudes face, so out of place. Koolio Limerick Princess, hugs for you, James :)
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Date: 11/17/2014 9:10:00 PM
Good limerick, Nette, love the girl's spunk
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Date: 11/17/2014 3:43:00 PM
hahaha, yours has a great final line!! Glad to see you got a new contest up and I hope I can find time for it. I can't believe how far I am falling behind here. YIKES
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:05:00 PM
Lol.....well done nette..huggs
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Date: 11/17/2014 9:58:00 AM
Loved the humour... it turns my crank!!! Do more... huggsies, Jack XXX
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Date: 11/17/2014 7:24:00 AM
- Well done, Nette :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2014 6:02:00 AM
I guess she told him! :) Didn't expect that twist at all, Nette. Thanks for your visit today. It is always good to hear from you. Hugs
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Date: 11/17/2014 5:47:00 AM
Such a clever and whimsical write Nette!
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Date: 11/17/2014 5:38:00 AM
I definitely had a much needed laugh. Men think they can always flirt around ( not me, lol).You wit shows in a clever repartee. Thank you for a win in your contest.
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Date: 11/17/2014 5:26:00 AM
Hah! This dude finally found his match. Playful limerick; the drinks are on me! Wow, Nette.
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