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Cleanzing Rain of Love

on the ocher drape in bent shadow light crawling a warm springtime flux drenching souls in purity lies a simple love flower __________________________ __________________________ # 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/11/2015 5:35:00 PM
Oh that is a nice visual, great write, great win :)
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Date: 3/9/2015 9:42:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Rick...the third line is heart melting...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/8/2015 6:18:00 PM
HI RICK, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/8/2015 11:56:00 AM
Rick, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:51:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rick:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your placement.
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:53:00 AM
Congrats Rick for this wonderful poem and win...Love
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Date: 3/6/2015 11:44:00 PM
This was a very elegant tanka, Rick. I am not surprised it was written by someone like you, with such a way with imagery. Congrats in my contest. i was being more sparing with my top three but had i made more way for placements in those higher spots,this one would have gotten in.
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Date: 3/1/2015 5:04:00 PM
Beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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