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Cleansing the Dust

My shoulders drag through whirls of crescent night under a wooden bridge this heart retains, a pile of thickened ash where reason hangs on edge, hollow the veins. Above a skyline, a deep madness roars oh, patience grows thin along slithered bends that I, in deep thought grope for fate’s comfort as street lantern descends. Nearing the foot, a dove rustles my skin its pearl-like glow cleanses a dusty face, soothing my troubled head so near the fall, so far a warm embrace. From nowhere, a glossed horizon appears connecting me back to life’s overpass, as birdsongs lift my glides till cinders fly as joy pours on life’s hourglass. John Lawless' Gathering Dust 3/02/2015

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Date: 3/19/2015 3:48:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work,Sara
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Date: 3/19/2015 11:26:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome gathering Dust win..... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:30:00 PM
wonderful imagery and unique entry into the contest. Congrats for your win, Nette.
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:45:00 AM
Nette, so beautifully written and full of inspiration of how seeing and embracing joy in a magic moment can lift one's heart and soul out of the ashes. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2015 8:00:00 PM
Unique nette, keep them coming. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2015 3:34:00 PM
Nette, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/15/2015 2:14:00 PM
Congrats nette, another win in your column! BG
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Date: 3/15/2015 12:03:00 PM
Nette, I had to play with this one to catch the many subtitles therein. As I love words and the nuances of poetic style it unfolded as I pondered them. Thank you for participating in the contest.
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Date: 3/15/2015 11:34:00 AM
an enchanting write Nette - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/10/2015 10:36:00 AM
Beautiful poem well crafted. After all at the end all the dusty thoughts are cleansed and paved the way to new horizon. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:00:00 PM
One of the prettiest ones I have seen on the theme of dust!! nette. I just saw a comment from you that you had a soupie for me. Where is it?? (I will be here for twenty more min)
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Date: 3/4/2015 1:09:00 PM
If this isn't on the winners podium, I'll eat my hat. Now, I'm off to buy a hat. Good luck Princess, hugs, James :)
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Date: 3/3/2015 10:36:00 AM
Imaginative wizardry with the pen. Well done. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/3/2015 9:26:00 AM
So nice to read your verse this morning nette- an uplifting tale. Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2015 1:29:00 AM
Wonderful pen u hv nette,, amazingly beautiful is this one dear! Gl in contest!
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Date: 3/2/2015 3:26:00 PM
How quickly our hearts fill with dust of troubles and cinders of regret . . . these melancholy feelings drag us down - - - but hope, the wings of a dove -- lift our spirits. A lovely and compelling write dear Nette!7
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Date: 3/2/2015 3:11:00 PM
Transformational! You swept off the old dust and came out shining on the horizon. A phoenix kind of brilliant poetry, Nette
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Date: 3/2/2015 2:58:00 PM
There is hope for a heavy heart....hugs Tim
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Date: 3/2/2015 2:51:00 PM
Interesting work.If for a contest, reads likes winner..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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