Cleansing

the cleansing of the world until, we start again just cave men till, we find the thoughts of clever, we seek the never never, till intellect do fill though stupidy instills , greed, money power will, be, a wasted bitter pill, no rich man lives forever... of David Williams "The End" Don,...

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/10/2012 12:43:00 PM

Interesting thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/10/2012 11:55:00 AM

What a glorious write my friend! I really enjoyed this intellect you have instilled on us, maybe plotting the downfall of all the rich maybe? Ha Ha! I just love this wonderful poem you have written Don! Great Work!!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/10/2012 9:12:00 AM

More quick and quirpy thoughts of yours, Don! Sadly, this is so very true. The ultra rich will worry when having too much, as the lower classes will worry about not having enough.:( The humble shall inherit the earth, but some days the price for the living feels steep. Makes me wonder what will be left after the govenments, oil honchos, industries, etc., have ruthlessly taken their share? Brains can buy an education, but they seem to lost direction? Oie, one to think about, Don! Best wishes, love, Mikki

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2012 5:01:00 AM

So true Don, well written. - oxox Anne-Lise

David Williams

Date: 6/10/2012 4:10:00 AM

Don sometimes I think it might be better if we had the chance to start all over again, well said mate, have a great day..Dave