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Cleansed Hs

wind howls through the trees rhythmically moves the leaves then haunting quiet breeze stirs the senses reassuring to the soul awakens sleeper storms blowing over a refreshed feel to the air no longer stagnant mistral, clear the skies though you are so strong and cold inevitable immerse me in nature's gales cleanse my mind of all that ails Haiku Sonnet Poetry Contest 2 may 2023 Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel

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Date: 6/14/2023 5:39:00 PM
Very nice, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/15/2023 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Eve x
Date: 6/14/2023 1:49:00 AM
beautifully done, congratulations
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Date: 6/14/2023 2:07:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 6/13/2023 3:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, D.D. - hugs
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Date: 6/13/2023 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise x
Date: 6/13/2023 1:12:00 AM
I like this windy poem, DD, great final line, congratulations:)
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Date: 6/13/2023 1:24:00 AM
Thanks Jo! Great contrast :)
Date: 6/12/2023 12:13:00 PM
what a lovely uplifting poem Dilly, nothing like a good storm to clear the air. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I appreciate all your support x
Date: 5/2/2023 7:57:00 PM
I like how you move through the different stages of the storm to emerge clean and refreshed, hope this does well in the contest~
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Date: 5/2/2023 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Michelle, your kind words of support are much appreciated :)

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