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Cleaning Sandcastle

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Scantle...breaking into pieces

. Soft sighing of tall Georgia pines Simmering stew bubbles on stove Sounds_scents envelope combine Sabotaged sage while she so strove To complete cleaning sandcastle Built in sand, shuttle there now scantle In honor of John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/10/2011 10:18:00 AM

LOL, I find alliteration's almost impossible to read out loud

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2011 11:52:00 PM

sara dear, loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/12/2011 9:48:00 PM

I love esp the first line. Makes me feel there. Love tall pines. Congratulations to you Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/12/2011 6:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!---Lori

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2011 2:01:00 PM

Sara, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Cleaning Sandcastle" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2011 12:55:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 4:15:00 AM

Sara congrats on your win..David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/12/2011 1:50:00 AM

Congratulations Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 1:27:00 AM

Congrats Sara on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv...

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/12/2011 12:40:00 AM

A 5th place congratulations Sara for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/8/2011 11:44:00 PM

Shhhhh...I am trying to hear the soft sighing of your tall Georgian pines....so peaceful an image and sound. Great write...best luck in this super competitive contest. Gwendolen