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Cleaning Day Dream

Oh hungry vacuum cleaner, there you go— Like magic, sucking up the grimy dirt In my small world of carpets, floors, and walls. You gobble up unwanted enemies Of lint and dust polluting my domain, And leave behind a sparkling atmosphere. Oh hungry vacuum cleaner, if I could Direct your force upon the total earth; Suck up its cobwebbed corners—dusty paths Which cloud our sights and discompose our minds; Draw off the film to let clear colors show, And make it shiny-bright as my small world. November 2, 2014

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Date: 11/6/2014 1:39:00 PM
Those things that agitate our mind would be better off if vacuumed up into a contain and held forever..Enjoyed reading this one that uses some poetic techniques..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2014 2:45:00 PM
Sara, thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comment on my poem. Only a dream...that's for sure. Sandra
Date: 11/3/2014 8:53:00 AM
I love how you turned it into a dream for cleaning up the world. This was a very imaginative and well crafted poem, sweetie!! Wish I could see more of your poems. I have to get to work now, so you are my last of the morning. have a great Monday!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2014 3:01:00 PM
Andrea, so nice of you to stop by with your encouraging words about my poem. I guess you'll get to see more poems as I try to keep up with these contests! Hope you had a good day. Sandra
Date: 11/3/2014 6:43:00 AM
Unending desires Sandra! But this is one where u hv everyone supporting! Gl in contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2014 3:02:00 PM
Thanks, Dr. Sharma...yes, unending desires for sure. Thanks for stopping by with your comment and best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Date: 11/2/2014 7:23:00 PM
Love your dream, Sandra...wish it could be so. Best wishes in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/2/2014 7:25:00 PM
Hi Faye, thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and best wishes in the contest. Sandra

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