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Cleaned Out

Robb Wilkins took three showers a day he overdid some things he'd say. But alas to his strain less of him did remain until he showered himself away.

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 9/4/2016 10:20:00 AM

Whew, me thinks he met his demise thanks to OCD! Another cute and funny write Paul!:)

Paul Schneiter
Date: 1/23/2019 8:25:00 PM

Thanks, Cheryl. Your comment reminds me of a winter season riddle. It goes thus: Joe: "What do you call an old snowman?" Moe: "I don't know." Joe: "Water." (I never was good at humor.) . Hugs, always, Paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/29/2016 9:45:00 AM

Love it - served as my morning chuckle with coffee so I thank you ... CayCay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 9/4/2016 8:17:00 AM

Thank you, CayCay. Your kind words mean a lot to me. I value them, and I appreciate them. hugs xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/26/2016 6:37:00 PM

lol....awesome Paul

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/27/2016 6:40:00 AM

Thank you, Tim. I appreciate your kind comment. One of my goals is to try to make my limericks as clever as yours.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2016 6:37:00 PM

This reminded me of a very old song called my baby has gone down the plughole! great humour as ever Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/27/2016 6:44:00 AM

As always, thank you, Jan. Praise from you, as I have said before, is golden; I treasure it. hugs x x x Paul