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Clawed Branch

Discarded driftwood clawed branch in desperation where once it stood tall .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2014 3:59:00 PM

I think I never heard anyone say those two words together before. Clawed branch, a unique image!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2014 5:01:00 PM

Descriptive work indeed..Driftwood has it own character doesn't it..Thanks for the visit to my page ..Your comment was uplifting..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 4:17:00 PM

James, it does not matter if it's your strongest form... Just as long as someone is enjoying them... :) Linda

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 6/24/2014 9:13:00 PM

right back at ya

James Fraser
Date: 6/24/2014 2:32:00 PM

;-) ty :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:19:00 AM

James,, well done on the haiku. Enjoyed the image. LINDA

James Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 2:08:00 PM

Thanks kindly Linda, although Haiku are not my strongest form, James :)

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/9/2014 8:13:00 AM

wow I loved it beautifully done...love Jayne xxx

James Fraser
Date: 6/9/2014 2:36:00 PM

Thanks Jayne, as I mentioned above. Haiku is a form I need to do more of, James xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/7/2014 9:16:00 PM

I love how trees reveal their history from their beginnings recorded in their rings and in their twisted limbs and even in their leaves. You provide the majesty of the tree in this wonderful haiku James!

James Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 10:47:00 AM

Thank you kindly Connie :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/7/2014 7:17:00 PM

Oh interesting :) Love haiku's they say so much in so little words, and yours is done well ;) good job

James Fraser
Date: 6/8/2014 10:28:00 AM

Thank you Casarah :)