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Classy Chassis Rusted and Busted I was a classic beauty at my time Eyes of envy upon me at the time My body and chrome spit shine My windows reflected the world’s soul and mind My sweet smelling leather seats you’d climb And place your bare legs, feet on the dash Driving me down Main Street with a sudden lash Rusted and Busted Abandoned and forgotten I adorn The sun kiss and the smell of rain field Now green velvet moss conceals, Air threads through my broken windshields When once you sat, The stain and smell of mildew on my crack leather seats, Brown leaves and twigs rest on old broken springs Nature’s home of exquisite silence yields I think of the past and the future A classic beauty at my time Now Rusted and Busted Abandoned and forgotten 6/15/2016

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Date: 8/7/2016 7:24:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest with this wonderful poem lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/6/2016 8:26:00 AM
Congrats Eve! A fine choice by Linda, I'm glad I got to read it.
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Date: 8/6/2016 2:10:00 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:16:00 PM
I really like this , especially the second half the way you described her among the rain field and leaves. i have mine to put up, but my gosh, I am not even getting comments on my last two. it's like PULLING teeth around here lately. Have you noticed? Ugggg. Well, thanks for visiting mine. Have a lovely Sunday
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