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Clarity In a Treasure Box

Clarity in a Treasure Box (Clarity Pyramid) PEACH petals pink blossom tinged with ardent shades pressed in my memory a promise of intense love “seducing with her luscious charm” --------------------------------------- Contest: Clarity in a Treasure Box Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Placed 4th © paul callus ~ 28th June 2016

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Michael Dom

Date: 7/25/2016 11:22:00 AM

a succulent piece and a place at the table too. well done and cheers!

Paul Callus
Date: 7/25/2016 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Michael. Your lovely feedback is appreciated! Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/11/2016 10:48:00 AM

Hi Paul, I enjoyed this seductive write. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 7/13/2016 1:48:00 PM

So pleased that you like it, Alexis:) Thank you for the lovely comments! Regards ~ paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2016 5:51:00 PM

this is SPLENDID. Big congrats. I bet it did super well.

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2016 9:50:00 AM

I'm happy with the result, Andrea, and even more with your 'splendid' comment:) Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2016 11:56:00 AM

I love this Paul! Congratulations on your high placement! 7 ; )

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2016 4:44:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Your sincere support is much appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2016 1:26:00 PM

such a kinesthetic pyramid, paul...subtly passionate!... huge cheers on your shining award and thanks for participating in my contest.. huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 7/3/2016 11:48:00 AM

It's always a pleasure participating in your contests, Nette. Thank you for my placement; so pleased that you found it to your liking. Hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/29/2016 8:04:00 PM

a seductive poem indeed! :) Great write!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2016 11:01:00 AM

Coming from you these comments are much appreciated, Arthur! Thank you! ~ All the best. // paul

Chris Hagy

Date: 6/29/2016 6:18:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2016 10:32:00 AM

So glad that you like it, Chris! Thank you! ~ Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 6/29/2016 5:39:00 PM

Paul, this is good I love the last line a 7 and good luck in the contest :)

Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2016 10:13:00 AM

Thank you very much, Eve. The poem, on the whole, did not take long to write, but I got stuck quite a while on that last line!! Hugs // paul

Constance La France

Date: 6/29/2016 3:21:00 PM

Paul, this is LOVELY and I am loving it 7 ~

Paul Callus
Date: 6/29/2016 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, Constance; both the lovely comment and high rating are truly appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/29/2016 4:34:00 AM

wow second poem of this form i've read today,,certainly brings out the best of you Paul..

Paul Callus
Date: 6/29/2016 1:12:00 PM

Thanks for the complimentary remarks, Harry. All the best...paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/28/2016 4:16:00 PM

Lovely...when you write of romance and love...your words sing. Great write. Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/28/2016 4:55:00 PM

Thank you, Eileen. Your comments never fail to encourage:) Glad that you enjoyed. hugs // paul

Vali Tsironi

Date: 6/28/2016 4:06:00 PM

Elegant poem Paul! Great work!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/28/2016 5:32:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Vali. So pleased to have made your acquaintance! ~ Regards // paul