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Clarity In a Treasure Box - Poetry Contest

FUN time-out vacation zeals of zebras bound kenyan dust sweeps and swirls stripes blaze with great adventure "african treasure, dream fulfilled" Written 29/6/16 for CLARITY IN A TREASURE BOX - Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2016 6:17:00 PM

I guess that safari did not fit in the treasure box, but it was a very fun entry. Loved the read. Congrats, David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2016 1:48:00 PM

david, i have never given an HM in any of my challenges but the whole piece, except the first line, was exciting, well-worded... fine congrats on your win and thanks for joining my contest.. huggs

David Lindsay
Date: 7/4/2016 9:32:00 AM

Thanks very much for the encouragement. Interesting format to try to write to :)

Franco Gonza

Date: 6/29/2016 1:35:00 PM

A thrill of an adventure well done! I hope to visit Africa someday! Soup mail!