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Clarity

To reach within and to pull out the pain And expose their tremors that vibrate still To move between senses and to sustain And challenge validity, strength of will I 'm lost in a time, a soul unaware In a world cold where sadness will absorb Confused by the moments tightening snare As tears begin to flow from each closed orb To fall to my knees in a long silent scream That pierced the soul with its pain profound And remembered the death of your eyes gleam To wander in emptiness round and round Sad is the innocence betrayed by death Sad is a love that has felt one's last breath 11/9/16 contest 236

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Date: 11/11/2016 10:55:00 AM
Too serious for me...not...lol...loved it Frederic...beautifully sadly seriously done...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/10/2016 8:27:00 PM
wow, so deep and sad, Frederic. And your slow tone reading it makes it all the more serious sounding. Now stop being TOO serious. Carnival cruises do not have the mishaps you described! I sure wish I could do another one around Mexico this time.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 11/10/2016 9:55:00 PM
my cruise was on a 1000 foot long ship with 130 aircraft on it across the Atlantic ocean half way around the world..as for being serious you know 90% of my poetry is made up..I'm to laid back to be serious..
Date: 11/9/2016 11:58:00 PM
Terrific, as usual, Frederic. Bleak and sorrowful. A fine piece. regards, Viv
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Date: 11/9/2016 2:10:00 PM
pensive and deep with your images sad yet marvelously spilled, frederick.. huggs
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