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Clandestine

CLANDESTINE Clandestine… nice and clean her intent candle glow.. all for show his beguile mesmerized hypnotized enticed lured Clandestine… anodyne arena underground concealed furtively she bares her soul lured Clandestine… surreptitious squeaky clean secretively seduced conceded surrendered and then.. DO NOT DISTURB © Kim van Breda—2 July 2015

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Viv Wigley

Date: 7/5/2015 1:36:00 PM

Nice, flowing verse with a cracking build up, and the door clicks shut on the last lines better than Barbara Cartland could have done it (no comparison here- yours is much hotter) Viv x

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/5/2015 8:39:00 AM

Sizzling hot, my dear Kim. ;) I wouldn't dare disturb this clandestine tryst. Good luck in the contest. It's all very...beguiling.

Kim Van Breda
Date: 7/5/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thanks Eileen.. glad to see you active on the Soup again. I come and go.. too many distractions in life. Hope you are well. Contest... there is a contest with this theme? x~x