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Civil Unrest

Before I gave the judge my guilty plea and turned a fable into honesty, I thought of all I’d miss for ninety days while patched in pumpkin orange and dwelling grays; this I’ll confess: unrest confined my crime and forced my will on unsuspecting time, until my mother’s weekly visit came; until her love absolved imprisoned shame. 11/23/2018 Submitted for: Unrest of Spirit Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 11/24/2018 9:49:00 PM
So much truth in this one, Phillip. Mothers just KNOW! … And it has the poetic flair to it as well: Not easily accessible on the first read. Takes some contemplation---which good poetry should do. Nicely done. Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 11/24/2018 6:49:00 PM
Like Brenda here, I too think this is very nicely done. Best of luck in the contest .Julia does not give many wins out but I think this is a deserving one.
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Date: 11/23/2018 11:59:00 PM
Watch out for Mothers!! How is it that a mom knows something has happened, even before it has happened?? Is that saying true, they have eyes in the back of their head? I believe so. It is best to confess. Yes!! :) Just my simple thinking. ~ Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/24/2018 12:27:00 PM
:) Yes, it seems that way. So, watch out for the drones!!!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 11/24/2018 12:01:00 AM
I think that might have been the case back in the day, but I'm pretty sure now all of 'em have a fleet of those Amazon drones keeping tabs on us. :)

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