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Cityscape The artist’s hand reshapes yesterday In straight lines Of hard edges - Peaks of Right angles perfected Missing oblique or obtuse – Claiming the horizon In full frontal Silhouette Cut from ebony shades, When daylight sinks into the shadows And twilight goes down meeting midnight One dimension pyramids, Floors layered by steel reinforced Triangulated honeycombs, Octagonal rounds Gather cotton clouds Topping off their naked crowns, Lofty spires Scrape the midnight To gather far flung stars Flat rectangles with jute box tops Soar with arches - Lines leaping up and sliding down - Squares low and squat, Took up their space, Yanked from the line, Openings left Like toothless Grinning; Concealed within the cityscape unblinking The murmurings of urban sighs, No rise and fall of breathing, Foundation’s feet bound in stone Swaying only when magnum cores Tremble moving plates east to west, north to south; Unseen The doorway cradle songs Of shivering dreams, Desperation Pacing On the nineteenth floor Fauna’s night perfume Floating up behind dark floral gates Of swirling iron Grids of neighbors – blocks of neighborhoods - Graphs of boulevards winding round, Absent from the cityscape. Inspirational verse – “When the lights go down in the city and the sun shines on the bay; do I want to be there in my city….I want to be there in my city.” Journey

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Date: 2/13/2020 11:27:00 AM
Congrats Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/13/2020 8:48:00 PM
Thanks LJ!
Date: 2/12/2020 6:00:00 PM
Brilliantly composed verse Sam, so discriptive, by any chance are you an architect?. Congrats on your top win. Tom
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Date: 2/13/2020 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Tom! I' m not an architect. But it was fun to try to think in terms of architecture! This poem was such a joy to compose and put it into a format like a building!
Date: 2/5/2020 3:24:00 PM
Awesome, Sam. Love the emotion throughout. A FAVE. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:32:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulations. You really have great abilties to see into the heart of a piece. I wanted the emotion to be there but almost encased by the cityscape
Date: 2/5/2020 12:07:00 PM
Great write, Sam. I particularly like the toothless imagery and the lines, "Claiming the horizon / In full frontal / Silhouette" Congrats on your high placement ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2020 10:27:00 PM
Hi John, You picked one of my favorite lines and one of my favorite images. Thank you for your congrats!
Date: 2/5/2020 9:19:00 AM
Amazing descriptive write, Sam--congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:25:00 PM
Vijay, Thank you for stopping by and for your message. Was so much fun to develop the images.
Date: 2/5/2020 8:44:00 AM
Sam, congratulations on your win in the contest with this awesome poem _Constance
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:22:00 PM
Thank you Constance! I so appreciate your message.
Date: 2/5/2020 8:40:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... very picturesque. God bless you.
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Beata. I did try to create a mental picture so readers could put themselves into the cityscape. Blessings to you!
Date: 2/5/2020 5:57:00 AM
Great poem. I've really enjoyed reading all three winners' poems. Thanks.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2020 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Gary. I too loved all three poems. Such an honor to place. I know the competiton must have been stiff.
Date: 2/5/2020 3:38:00 AM
I enjoyed the imagery you have created here, Sam. Well done for the poem's high win of third place in my contest "Cityscape".
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2020 10:15:00 PM
Julia, Thank you. I absolutely loved your theme and I am so honored by the third place. The theme really generated the imagery. So fun to write!
Date: 1/21/2020 9:23:00 PM
Your magnificent description of the cityscape reminds me so much of New York, Sam..superbly written! I’m faving this one! :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/21/2020 11:34:00 PM
Laura, Thank you and thank you for your feedback. Yes, I can see the New York City skyline maybe from Hobokken with the moon behind the Empire State Building!

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