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City's Malady

Take us into the folds of your tattered skirt – O mother, whose gap-toothed children buried in smog reeking of mirth carry stones in their chest like men. O mother, whose gap-toothed children hiding hearts scalded by your warm concrete Carry stones in their chest like men - cloak our bodies even with the bitterest tears. Hiding hearts scalded by your warm concrete Mother, will your children still remember how you cloak our bodies even with the bitterest tears as dark fumes taint your pure laughter O mother, we are testaments to your decay so take us into the folds of your tattered skirt, and rot with us in our shared tomb of ashen gray buried in smog, reeking of mirth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/23/2015 8:59:00 PM
Sad that the "city's malady", the ugly truth, is more pronounced in our country. We seem to have sacrificed much more in the name of progress. An intelligent, sensitive write amply using metaphor and imagery. Loved this!
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Date: 5/21/2015 9:18:00 AM
Life is never the same again as it used to be when you looked back. I can remember my home town Makati City when she was younger few houses lots of spaces to roam free and run around, simple people, uncomplicated life - the last time I visit her it feels like am a stranger to her embrace.
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Therese Genota
Date: 5/21/2015 9:26:00 AM
You must be from the Philippines too, right? Exactly. I did write this with Manila in mind, although I myself have never seen it when it was still "beautiful".

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