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...early Spring walk around 3.2mi. Lake Calhoun...so named after controversial industrialist sotten with checkered past...movement underway to return name to Native American Dakota "Bde Maka Ska" White Earth Lake. Purple Finches trill their soothing song to people walking around Lake Bde Maka Ska, a deep glacial lake in the heart of Minneapolis. A lone Eagle cruises above, easily snatching spawning Carp from the shallows, gracefully cruising away, talons firmly clutching the writhing Carp. I enjoy watching families enjoying their first walk around the lake, infants in strollers taking in their first inhalations of sights, sounds and smells after winter isolation. Young people wander wide-eyed, wondering how the world sees them, as they establish identity through dress, movement & interaction with others...subtle changes will occur as the summer evolves...reacting or not, to perceived reflection. Most of all, I enjoy my own movement, evaluating subtle changes I notice in myself, returning to the park bench by the path where I comfortably situated my 87yr. old Mom, grateful to have the opportunity to once more enjoy our city of lakes, wondering how many more such gifts she will enjoy, Grateful for the moment 5/7/17

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Date: 10/25/2017 1:05:00 PM
Simply beautiful Jim.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/25/2017 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Richard
Date: 7/27/2017 8:08:00 AM
You are most fortunate to be part of such beautiful surroundings, James...obviously you value and appreciate it. I enjoyed the read - My best regards! :) john P.s It occurs to me that your mother has enjoyed a long and productive life...And who could ask for more than this. May God in his infinite mercy and wisdom bless and keep her!
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Date: 7/27/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thanks John!
Date: 7/5/2017 1:33:00 PM
Nicely done James. Really enjoyed reading this piece. Very heartfelt trust all goes well with your mother. Regards, Craig
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/27/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/26/2017 8:18:00 AM
Loved the alliteration in the stanza before last. Very picturesque this piece.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 5/26/2017 1:02:00 PM
You are very kind to comment, Fatima...welcome any time!
Date: 5/12/2017 1:23:00 PM
James, wonderful! I loved this walk you took me on with those twittering birds by the lakes with your mother, it truly touched my heart. My mom died on mothers day but just before she told me she wanted to see the sky and I made that happen lifting her out of bed into a wheelchair with nurses telling me you can'nt do that!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 5/12/2017 4:42:00 PM
Me n' Ma busted Pop out of one nursing home where they were leaving him sore all nite in excrement and brought him home to comfort of passing with love and care...I applaud your bravery my friend!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2017 1:24:00 PM
Oh almost forgot 7+++
Date: 5/11/2017 9:18:00 AM
It's a beautiful life when you can appreciate the little things. Beautiful and sincere :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 5/11/2017 11:29:00 AM
Thanks Akkina!
Date: 5/9/2017 7:22:00 PM
James, delayed gratification for me ...what a beauty you have here. And it spans Nature, Family (your darling Mom) and spawning of several species (LOL!). I loved this diction: "infants in strollers taking in their first inhalations of sights," All round, a stunning piece (Man o man - you are ready to explode with poetry & gratitude) Ps. 91 (He who dwells in the shelter of El Elyon ...)#7
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 5/9/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Brother Anil, Shalom, Sir!
Date: 5/8/2017 8:02:00 AM
What a beautiful moment in time you described James, reconnecting with it all:) Amitiés
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 5/8/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Marie! I see you use French word for friendship...I belong to a French Catholic church in Minneapolis called "Our Lady of Lourdes" and the Saint who watches over me is St. Therese of Lisieux!
Date: 5/7/2017 4:23:00 PM
Just beautiful sights Jimbo. It is great to take it all in after a long winter.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 5/7/2017 9:21:00 PM
So true...Tim, I am much reflective this Spring...broke my arm in Jan. falling on ice...recovered...quit working after 40yrs. in restaurant mgmt. & physically prepped (I think I looked sharp in tux!) for 2 Daughters weddings this yr! 1 done!

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