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Circus of Life

Watch the lights Watch the circus Circus of dreams Circus of dream’s illusions Illusions etched in the mind Illusions from false grandeur Grandeur bites reality Grandeur wields puppets Puppets of hardened men Puppets clutched unto ropes Ropes thick as curtains Ropes opening dark theaters Theaters for crowds lonely Theaters booming Booming under walls Booming down on grim faces Faces acting joyful Faces with masks Masks for sunken tears Masks for rich donors Donors in need Donors in shadows lost Lost among hours farce Lost through bottomless time Time a vagrant Time grating a heart Heart colder than rock Heart numb to love Love that is endearing Love that can touch Touch a moon beneath the rain Touch an air of laughter Laughter down from the belly Laughter from a special one One who gives openly One who delights in wonder Wonder of new journeys Wonder of sorrow Sorrow lifting faith Sorrow healing bleak nights Nights without masquerades Nights without dead flowers Flowers naturally awake Flowers aflame Aflame and not below weeds Aflame with life Life spilling breath that abides Life drifting with its god God... Abides.. -------- Debbie Guzzi's Down Under Blitz 9/4/2015

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Date: 9/12/2015 8:54:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2015 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Nette! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:34:00 PM
You are a genius philosopher and a Doctor too because you have related a nice chain how sensation causes in the masses and how they react in to our mind one after another. A sensational river flows from Himalaya of consciousness to the Ocean of wisdom. Thanks for your support my lovely friend. 7+ i feel. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:55:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT**
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Date: 9/7/2015 6:29:00 PM
Fabulous write, Nette, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/7/2015 12:25:00 AM
You just saved me a ticket to the Circus!!!! Loved this!
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Date: 9/6/2015 11:28:00 PM
Superb winning write nette, big congrats!
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Date: 9/6/2015 8:56:00 PM
Loved the layers of meaning nette, like to see you try this form again, with shorter lines -let GO! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/6/2015 8:37:00 AM
This is the perfect example of how a blitz works; deftly planned. Title and topic have to be seen to before any writing starts, in order to avoid hiccups along the way. Very smooth and easy flowing. ~ hugs // paul
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Date: 9/4/2015 5:07:00 PM
Reads like winning material..Way to go with this one..These are not so easy to write are they..Good job though..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 9/4/2015 2:24:00 PM
Lovely well constructed Blitz.....good luck dear poet friend Nette Onclaud.....love, Anu:-)
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Date: 9/4/2015 11:05:00 AM
Fluid thoughts all throughout, Nette. Would like to try this some other time. hugs!
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Date: 9/4/2015 8:13:00 AM
You do this form nicely as well, Nette. What a talented woman you are, dear. Good luck in the contest....Love those last two lines....how true.
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:35:00 AM
Your tender words and tremendous poem make this rough world a better place to live in. More blessings!
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:07:00 AM
A magnificent Blitz of truths and schemes! Good luck dear, nette!
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:04:00 AM
- With laughter from the belly ..... I wish you luck in the contest and a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/4/2015 7:02:00 AM
This is truly a breakaway from our usual hypocrisy.I like how you brought me to a dark scene and lifted me with a sense of faith. One more eloquent poem from you!
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