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Circles of Slumber

The amaryllis yawns in bed of white The fall of day paints shadows on the rose Each flower is a ward of solemn night Their gentle sleep upon which none impose Beyond the halls and down the drowsy stair Into the hallowed stillness of the lake Illuminating every pebble there The moon believes that no one is awake Yet bittern watches all with eyes of gold Alighted new in absence of the light And with his lusty call so clear and bold He breaks the quietude and then takes flight A ripple in the water seeks the shore It meets the rocks and ripples there no more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/24/2013 7:26:00 PM
Jeremy, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:25:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! I love Sonnets, and this is one of my favorites that I've read here. Thanks for checking out some of my work too!
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Date: 3/23/2013 12:07:00 AM
Yes, I was right. It was you!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/25/2013 8:21:00 PM
twas
Date: 3/16/2013 8:45:00 AM
oh my gosh, Jeremy. I so rarely find a sonnet that is written so immaculately as this one. The meter, the rhyme, the beautiful theme, the use of words. It's JUST what SONNET is meant to be. For me, this is one of your most amazing poems I've yet to see. And you have to know how I adore sonnets because I have written hundreds of my own. A big fat FAVE for this one!!!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/25/2013 8:21:00 PM
Awww Andrea you make me blush
Date: 3/15/2013 2:35:00 PM
Lovely imagery and format in this sonnet, Jeremy, you paint a beautiful lake scene.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/16/2013 6:59:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Sheri
Date: 3/13/2013 1:12:00 AM
Holy moly! Geez Louise! Who are you Jeremy? You are like a cheeky spring breeze...will not....can not be contained or trapped in a genre or box...love that about you!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/16/2013 6:53:00 AM
Aw!!!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/16/2013 6:52:00 AM
Aw!!!
Date: 3/12/2013 4:45:00 PM
Jeremy...just what do you do young man? Teacher? Roughneck? Student? I wonder!!!! Because you sure are one heck of a poet!!!!!!! You could write a book! Another great one!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/12/2013 11:31:00 PM
And yours, too. Donna. Hah! I am a roughneck student, I guess you could say. ;)
Date: 3/12/2013 3:27:00 PM
i'm always delighted to see a poem with your name attached and you certainly didn't disappoint this time. this poem is really a gem - just gorgeous imagery, rhythm and perfect rhyme - bravo!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/12/2013 11:31:00 PM
Ilene, your comments just make my day! Thank you!
Date: 3/12/2013 1:11:00 PM
I'm surprised there isn't any comments yet. This was really wonderful work! It felt so serene. "The moon believes that no one is awake" << golden line right there! Everything was elegantly descriptive and you've managed to make what you DIDN'T say as important as what you did... like the couplet at the end implying the bird jumping out of the lake and flying away... great sonnet!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 3/12/2013 11:30:00 PM
Very very kind of you, Timothy. I enjoy your poetry as well.

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