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Circles

Moon is drawing circles and you are drawing circles and you drift farer and farer. You will never be my husband after all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/21/2016 3:25:00 AM
Extraordinary, May! Some relationships do seem to drift in circles. The final line reveals a deep sadness. A very good short verse! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 10/18/2016 11:03:00 PM
WELL DONE, ORIDNARY M..SKAT
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Date: 10/9/2016 6:58:00 AM
Ordinary, very good. Linda
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Date: 10/9/2016 8:28:00 AM
thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem Linda

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