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1st verse: And love is but a petal falling to the ground though it wilts when not on the vine it's roots are safe and sound it's true that if nature had the time it could tear that all apart but I guarantee you that's not me if I hear you call as will an arrow I will dart and the righteous you will be 2nd verse: It may seem we're in a dry spell but it's drenched with the morning dew it may feel as does an empty well but baby that's not true hold me through the labor as a baby seeing the flicker of it's first glimpse of a layer of time coming quicker Chorus: Let it bloom in the moonlight let it blow through the storm leave it all behind with insight restrain me only warm soft pillows of moonlight may it show sweet and warm sunshine on me bright with kisses I adorn and hope will settle us in the sound though it tilts there's still a sign it suits us perfectly round for you I'll draw the line Copyright © 2021 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 7/1/2021 12:37:00 PM
"Beautiful" It needs music. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 8/2/2021 4:35:00 PM
Thank you Paula :)
Date: 5/1/2021 12:58:00 PM
Chorus is so sweet. Beautiful imagery. Smooth flow... Indeed a beautiful song
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/25/2021 11:43:00 AM
My favorite part is the second verse. Another potent write from your pen. Blessings Rick.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Richard :)
Date: 4/12/2021 1:32:00 PM
Your poems are extremely imaginative you are a poetess who was born to be such - stupendously powerful! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer :)
Date: 4/11/2021 8:30:00 AM
Really lovely pen Angela, so vivid and full of great imagery too. Hope you're having lovely weekend, Blessings be yours, Gordon
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Gordon :)
Date: 4/11/2021 12:56:00 AM
This is beautiful, Angela! All it needs now is for someone to put music to it! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Paul :)
Date: 4/10/2021 7:27:00 PM
I too, love the imagery here, Angela, the poetry so profound and powerful.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Harry :)
Date: 4/10/2021 5:15:00 AM
This is a wonderful, meaningful, song Angela. Enjoyed the rhythm you created in these verses. You held my attention from start to finish. So well written!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 4/10/2021 2:21:00 AM
This is nice one here. I can't just get enough of it. I hang on to every word. Want more and more.. Blessings
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/9/2021 1:53:00 PM
Hey I really missed your poems... So great to see you still posting .
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Silent One. Glad to see that you're back! :)
Date: 4/9/2021 10:17:00 AM
There is so much imagery in this verse. The part of the vine is what I like best. But the rest is great too.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 6/7/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Victor :)

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