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Cigarette Man

Just another day waking up to a cold empty house The breath dragging deep outta my lungs I walk outside and light up the morning's cigarette Breathing in the smoke deep deep in my lungs Emptyness as far as I can see against the shining sun And brillant blue of the morning sky But inside the gray clouds and storms brew, roll Prayer that goes on don't let anyone see inside my heart (This is a writing by my grandson who lives with me.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/25/2009 6:35:00 AM
I thought this seemed different from your normal work. I can relate, I used to do this every day, lighting up and staring vacantly into the freezing Boston cold, thinking how this addiction would make me face the toughest weather just to get a nicotine fix. Gray clouds and storms brew inside, I can always relate to that, with or without a cigarette in my lips. Tell him I think he's awesome Sara. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/23/2009 4:24:00 PM
Great job Cody!! keep sharing!! Love you!!
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:07:00 PM
Looks like poetry runs in the family, smile. That's great! Keep writing! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:34:00 PM
very good.my daughter also writes.She is the one who got me to start writing.
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Date: 11/23/2009 11:56:00 AM
A poet in the making ... how wonderful.. one of my sons also writes ... this is a start in the right direction as he has some very descriptive words in his verses... bravo little one... your Grandma is a shining example of what poetry is all about... thankxx for your comments, Sara, am using one finger to complete typings for right now... at least now I don't have to cook on turkey day.. u enjoy your holiday... luv . Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:33:00 AM
Hi Sara tell your grandson he's like his grandma. A good poet in the making! God Bless,Prince.
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