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His hands traveled over my body
Like a blind man learning the lay of the land of my bodied brail world
His breath,
SO intoxicating.........brings forth springs of truth
Disconnected words, but admissions of truth.
Like... I. ummmmm.. just. Not normally like this..
you make meeeeee flustered
but... I like it

Sentences,……………………words………and…. Thoughts…………………chyeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
My animal desires
To lose myself
Surrender it to the moment because the moment
Where you are kissing my neck getting my legs all tangled in yours our hearts
Rapidly beating through our thin layers of t-shirts
has me completly gone
and when I say gone I mean far past jupiter a thousand galaxies away laying in a cloud of bunnies.
 his tongue
Down my
Neck and…………………………….
Go a thousand miles away from where my critical thinking part of my brain ANALYZES
i know i am 
my common sense

Sighs of happiness
Higher than any hard hit of Marijuana 
Ughhhhhhhhh chyeaaaaaaaaaaaa
so numb 
Feeling lie I am hovering over top of my bed in ecstasy

INSTEAD I am laying here hours later alone in the dark typing suprisingly happy romantic poetry.
Since when did the poetess write a happy romantic piece for her poetry...

his cologne
sits on my skin. He is the sweetest sin
I would drink his kisses over and over again.
beause my mind is lost again.. taken by the tide
I am swept away again...
Drawn into his arms like the alternating parts of a magnet
I move to him Like the constant pull of the moon to the tide
My chest rises
And falls
as I take deep breathes of 
happiness in
it has been so long my lungs have only been lifted
by my lonely chagrin
mmmmmmmmmmmmmm my Heart rate is 
Dropping rapidly
my shoulders so tense before now sink into the fabric of his Vista Crusier
like playdough left out in the sun
He is pleasure in the form of a human
 he has me at a loss for words

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  1. Date: 4/30/2010 11:48:00 PM
    That was beautiful.... Check out, The Heat of The passionate Spirits and comment if you can...

  1. Date: 4/30/2010 11:44:00 PM
    intense writing worthy of the read...enjoyed it so much...^_^ v