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Chrysalis Torn Ii

Pompous are the powerful from lofty height. Far below and hid from sight, the masses quake. A doe dazed, sheep grazed, much downtrodden fright, lift head and heart for you, He’ll not forsake. The wealth of hearth and home, love, honesty, Within each grasp, if courage can but rise, Gifted all, despite place in mortal hierarchy. Rein the rabid wolf, with God’s law it vies. Remove the blinders from your down turned eyes. Raise your chin proudly to your own true Lord, find heart and try, for freedom is the prize. Arise, be bold, and cut the bloody cord. Emerge to face the dawn, chrysalis torn, lift from the cross of tyranny reborn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/30/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your fourth place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win....Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:51:00 AM
Very strong message you have here, Debbie :) Enjoyed reading this insightful sonnet-- congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Deb..I like the use of the chrysalis idea..and its really fits the form..something I cant do very well...well done. BG
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:56:00 PM
Many congratulations Deborah for this super win for this well deserved poem.
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:45:00 PM
Once again....I wish this had been placed higher....it is wonderful Deb! :)
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Debbie
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:11:00 PM
Well done, Deb. True to the Shakespearean form and beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:42:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Moses contest with this excellent entry luv.. very exciting to read and enjoy your sweet success tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:29:00 PM
Great content Debbie, in this top ten placement presentation, worthy of it's honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:29:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Debbie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/16/2010 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your first win, Deborah! Your faith is the shining armor that all believers wear, and you prove it by the words of this amazing, revealing poem. Freedom is found in the Bible, something Governments have failed to give their own people. God bless you for your proclamation of faith and the audacity of exposing this truth. God bless you and guide you in your quest. Have a wonderful day. Love, hugs, peace and happiness. Andrew.
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Date: 2/16/2010 6:11:00 PM
Great sonnet. Congrats on the win! -Mike
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:00:00 PM
Wow!! WooHoo and well deserved congrats!!! An awesome First Place win!!! So lovely to see Debbie gal. Big warm hugs for you! xoxoxo
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Date: 2/16/2010 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations, Deborah. This one is very deep. I love it. First Place! Bask in the glory that you deserve. This contest has some extremely great poems in it. It's nice to see you recognized. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Mac's Contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations on first place!!!
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Date: 2/15/2010 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win in Mac's contest... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/15/2010 2:38:00 PM
A beautiiful poem, I love the last two lines. Congratulations on your 1st palce win in my contest. It is a pleasure to read. Mac
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Date: 9/17/2009 8:40:00 AM
Excellent poem! I pray that our present economic situation will serve as an eye-opener for us to re-evaluate our whole lives, sort out all aspects, hold on to the good and necessary, give away the excess and throw out the junk! Thanks for sharing this Deborah, I love your poems and will read more! Sincerely,Audrey
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Date: 8/4/2009 6:55:00 AM
Beautiful poem,beautifully written.May your river of inspiration wash over me
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Date: 6/9/2009 5:53:00 AM
Yes, I DO like this poem. It is magnificent. Deborah, I have found a new poet - a new talent. I am reading you with great enjoyment. Also, I intend to post more of my poetry. I have much, much more, but have neglected to post it. Love your talent. Patricia
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:07:00 AM
Another revolutionary vision, war to wage from behind the banner of the cross. Deborah, you have a theme like this in your blood, and you need must bleed some more so the world can hear you ... it will be your sacrifice. Enjoying more still
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Date: 2/20/2009 12:42:00 AM
Debbie thank you for your welcome comments on my posting.Rgds Brian
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