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Our friendship started when I could barely speak. We have been through hell and back again. You gave me everything I needed to live. You gave me love when no one else did. You picked me up when I stumbled and fell. You were there to catch my tears when I'd cry You were there to hug me tight. The time has come to pay you back. I am here to take care of you dad. I guess all the drinks have caught up with you now. Your lungs are shutting down, Your liver is toast, You are suffering and I feel at a loss to help. I hate seeing you so weak and frail. If I had a wish to make It would be for no material thing. nor would it be anything for me. My Christmas wish is for you to live. For you to get your liver transplant. Your days are numbered and you are getting worse. Just know that I am praying hard for you. I am looking for a miracle this Christmas day And hopefully god hears my prayers.

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 5:31:00 AM
    Cory I pray you get your wish, and he will get well. Every line here shows your love for him. God does hear our prayers .I also will pray that you get your miracle. Hugs Anne

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:01:00 PM
    just reread that first part and realized it was your dad!! Makes it even the more poignant.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 11:00:00 PM
    This is so heartfelt, cory. I hope your dear friend gets the transplant. let me know, will you?

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:53:00 PM
    I hope that your father gets a new liver my friend! I will be praying for you and hoping that your wish does come true...such a selfless wish! This is a wonderful and awesome write Cory! I just want you to know that you are a very talented person as this is an outstanding poem, one that shows off this talent! I know this poem came from your heart, each and every word was purposeful and very important! I do hope everything works out, I will be thinking of you this Christmas! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:11:00 PM
    my dad is very sick and he is getting worse.. I could use all the prayers I can get right now..