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Christmas Traditions

Christmas Traditions By Dane Smith-Johnsen It was the Day after Thanksgiving and every store in town. Had planned to opened wide its doors before daylight could be found. It was an outlandish sight to see people sleep overnight. Shoppers camping on sidewalks people waiting in the moonlight. The Christmas shopping season was formally set in motion! Hustling, bustling, getting, and grabbing: bikes, pipes, and lotion. TVs, wreaths, computers, briefs, trees, ties, anything money buys. Some starry-eyed children sway singing with Santa beneath skies. Meanwhile, Jesus Christ, the nativity, and live manger scenes Attempt to teach people what the Christmas season really means. A few carolers come singing along their neighborhood streets. And the folks that they sing too, with big smiles, surprise them with treats. A God loving soul amid the clamorous celebrations, Gathers his family, to make costumes and preparations. Mary, Joseph, Jesus, shepherds, and the three Kings with gifts, myrrh. Reverently, they reenact our blessed Savior's Holy birth. This poem was written for Carolyn Devonshire's Christmas in Your Town contest. Poetic form: A narrative written in couplets.

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Date: 12/19/2009 8:51:00 PM
Congratson your win in Carolyn's contest, Dane Ann, very nice write!. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
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Date: 12/7/2009 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Dane Ann! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/4/2009 9:38:00 AM
lovely story, Dane-Ann. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/2/2009 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's poem :) such a wonderfully written reminder on the true meaning of Christmas!
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Date: 12/2/2009 5:46:00 PM
Wowser! You go gal BIG win! Light & Love
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Date: 12/2/2009 11:51:00 AM
Lovely poem Dane Ann, congrats on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:34:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Dane-Ann. A very beautifully descriptive poem! I like where your focus is leading the reader. Lightwalker
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:24:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Carolyn's contest Dane.rgds Brian
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Date: 12/1/2009 10:44:00 PM
Wonderful piece, Dane Ann! Congrats on your big win! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 12/1/2009 7:07:00 PM
Congraltulations Dane Ann on your win. I hate the fact that not all towns allow the manger scene on public property. After all it is His birthday. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2009 3:42:00 PM
Congrats, Dane Ann, on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest.. well deserved win.. blessings .. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/1/2009 1:11:00 PM
Congrats , Dane-Ann , on your contest win , with this great rhyming peice ...
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Date: 10/20/2009 10:44:00 AM
A beautiful narrative of Christmas tridition, here Dane. Best of luck. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 10/18/2009 7:10:00 AM
this is the true spirit of Christmas,,thanks for sending me on a journey to the season..beautiful--Charma
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Date: 10/17/2009 6:21:00 PM
Christmas is a lovely day in the calander, beautiful entry into Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 10/17/2009 4:50:00 PM
Yes...I am always amazed at the eager shoppers that fill their holiday with madness of a buying frenzy......the craziness is epidemic. I long for the old-fashioned values of yesterday. Good luck, a great poem!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/17/2009 4:33:00 PM
You captured the bustling activity of the season as well as the spiritual purpose. Thank you for supporting my contest, Dane. Love, Carolyn
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